rpanonmod ([personal profile] rpanonmod) wrote in [community profile] rpanons2016-07-14 01:59 pm

Gotta catch 'em all

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(Anonymous) 2016-07-15 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
I feel like most of the comics have very strange pacing. It was cool to see Jack and interesting to know he was there when Ana went down but tbh he probably could have existed as an offscreen voice and all of the same information would have gotten across, with more room to build up an effective climax, instead of cramming the main event into the last four panels.

I thought it was an interesting character study and certainly useful to have, given how little we know about some of these characters, but it's lukewarm storytelling, yeah.

(Anonymous) 2016-07-15 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
everything you said is exactly what my issue was with it, idk, it just feels a little lackluster

guess it could be worse for a totally free comic though