Good smut is as much about reaction as it is about action. Both are important. Pay attention to what your RP partner is showing you. Show us what your character is doing and how they're feeling. Smut can be both very physical. Be aware of where your character is sitting or standing, where their hands are, where they're looking. Be aware that sensations come in a range, from barely there to hard enough to leave bruises. There's hot and cold, there's sweat, there's scent and sound. Engage the senses, make us believe that this character is fully present in the moment. Convey your character's responses to your RP partner. Is the character enjoying themselves? Are they afraid? Are they bored? Are they amused?
And my little soap box, sex can be playful, too. Even when it's intense. Use the full range of emotions. Use the full range of sensations. More info is better than less, as long as it informs the scene and moves the action forward.
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Good smut is as much about reaction as it is about action. Both are important. Pay attention to what your RP partner is showing you. Show us what your character is doing and how they're feeling. Smut can be both very physical. Be aware of where your character is sitting or standing, where their hands are, where they're looking. Be aware that sensations come in a range, from barely there to hard enough to leave bruises. There's hot and cold, there's sweat, there's scent and sound. Engage the senses, make us believe that this character is fully present in the moment. Convey your character's responses to your RP partner. Is the character enjoying themselves? Are they afraid? Are they bored? Are they amused?
And my little soap box, sex can be playful, too. Even when it's intense. Use the full range of emotions. Use the full range of sensations. More info is better than less, as long as it informs the scene and moves the action forward.